June 24, 2010 at 12:32 amI ran across this poem and thought it was really great! Click the link to visit the author’s myspace page where you can hear him reciting. It’s interesting the way he does this one, it’s totally different from how it sounded in my head. :3
The Quiet World
In an effort to get people to look
into each other’s eyes more,
and also to appease the mutes,
the government has decided
to allot each person exactly one hundred
and sixty-seven words, per day.
When the phone rings, I put it in to my ear
Without saying hello. In the restaurant
I point at chicken noodle soup.
I am adjusting well to the new way.
Late at night, I call my long distance lover,
proudly say I only used fifty-nine today.
I saved the rest for you.
When she doesn’t respond,
I know she’s used up all her words,
so I slowly whisper I love you
thirty-two and a third times.
After that, we just sit on the line
and listen to each other breathe.
Love this. What an interesting concept (though pretty hard to imagine someone like me in this world, right?)
Haha! I’m sure you’d get used to it eventually. You’re pretty creative with words so you’d prolly have fun with it.